Alive
Now is the time of memories
So when all is dead and gone
Except for you, and the man next door,
And the tree down the block
That gives thin shade to neighborhood children
Riding in carriages, on bicycles, in cars
As they pass along their way,
Screaming and yelling into the spirited afternoon
A collection of wild-eyed dandelions
Growing free and without abandon
Between the cracks on the curbs
In the dimness of the elm
In the yard of the old man next door;
And what you see now will be sweet, and dear, and old
And you will cling to it in your arms like a husband does his wife
When he is asleep, and his love for her is unfiltered.
Memorize with ardor the sunset of tonight
Repeat in silence the songs of birds flitting ahead.
And live, live, live.
Live so when the darkness sets
And the Red Sea closes
You might still be
Alive.
Judge's Commentary
"Here I admire the poet's effort to tie the timeless to the temporary, the grand to the small. "Now is the time of memories" is a bold, provocative opening line, the reach of which is made accessible by the many specifics that follow, such as the dandelions growing the cracked sidewalks. Such juxtapositions are one of the many things that poetry does well, and here the technique is used with aplomb."